My name is Yearim Cha, and my English name is Yenny. I haven't been in any camp yet, and this is my first camp. I am going to introduce about myself.
My hobby is to draw pictures and singing. I had won a lot of singing and drawing contests. I always get an award of drawing contest in school. I get my first singing contest prize and had a first place. Isn't that wonderful?
I can speak three languages. Of course, I can speak Korean and English. If I couldn't speak English, I have no reason to participate in this GLPS camp. My third language is Japanese. I started to learn Japanese for fun, and finally, I completely mastered Japanese almost. Now for middle school, I am going to learn Chinese.
I have not been in many countries abroad. I have just been in Canada and USA when I was in elementary school. Before the elementary school, I have never been in other countries. Because of this, I don;t have so much experiences about other countries. But I wish that I could visit other countries when I grow up.This is all about me, and I bet you could find what is true, or false!
* This is the second 'Three Things about Me', that has one lie and two true.
답글삭제My name is Yearim Cha, and my English name is Yenny. I haven't been in any camp before, and this is my first camp. I am going to introduce myself.
My hobby is to draw pictures and to sing. I had won a lot of singing and drawing contests. I always get an award of drawing contest in school. I get my first singing contest prize and it was a first place. Isn't that wonderful?
I can speak three languages. Of course, I can speak Korean and English. If I couldn't speak English, I would have no reason to participate in this GLPS camp. My third language is Japanese. I started to learn Japanese for fun, and finally, I almost mastered Japanese. Now during my middle school kufe, I am going to learn Chinese.
I have not visited many countries abroad. I have just been to Canada and USA when I was in elementary school. Before the elementary school, I have never been to other countries. Therefore, I don't have so much experience staying in other countries. But I wish that I visit other countries when I grow up.
This is the revised version. Give me some more suggestions.
Hi Yenny, I am guessing that second one is a lie. Am I right?
답글삭제I liked how you organized into three clear paragraphs. From next essay you could work on adding a conclusion at the end to sum up the whole essay. I see introduction in this one which is good. Grammer seems to be solid and sentences are also nice.
Keep up the good work!
I think the second one has a lie. I can't believe someone could "master" Japanese without living in Japan. BUT I hope it is true.:) Beautiful blog!
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