Caine's Arcade
KONY 2012
We watched two videos, 'KONY 2012' and 'Caine's Arcade'. First, KONY 2012 is about one man, Joseph Kony and the children in Uganda. Joseph Kony kidnaps children when they are asleep and make them children soldiers. Then he orders the children to shoot their own parents with their gun. Because of this, children in Africa, especially in Uganda are not safe. They didn't know when they will be kidnapped. However, by KONY 2012 project started from the group Invisible Children, they are trying to stop Kony. The next video is about 9 years boy, Caine. He made his own arcade, toy machine like one in the real game shop in his father's autopart store. He made all of his arcade stuff by himself, and also tickets such as tokens and Fun Pass. His idea was fascinating, but there were few customers because his dad's store was located in the place where a few people go through. One day, one of the customer visited Caine's Arcade and he was impressed. He made a Facebook group 'Caine's Arcade' and many people was known about Caine's Arcade. Finally, Caine's Arcade become the popular arcade all around the world.
Between these videos, there are similar things, but also different things. The similar thing is that both videos is known and became famous by Facebook, and also YouTube. Each video started from the Facebook group. Because Facebook is one of the most popular social networks, people could see about it and information about Kony and Caine's Arcade could spread all around the world. Both videos are also viral video that spread faster as the virus. They were uploaded in YouTube, and many people saw this video. Finally, they could be the one of the popular video in YouTube. Third, this video is mainly about the kids, which are having problems. In KONY 2012, a kid living in Uganda, named Jacob had a problem that he need to be always worried because he was living in unsafe environment that he didn't know when he would be kidnapped. In Caine's Arcade, Caine had a problem that he had a few, or none of his customers. But all of this was solved with a help of alot of people. This also could be the similar thing of both videos. In KONY 2012, all people around the world, including Invisible Children, help them to stop KONY and now Kony's actions are silent. Because of this, some thinks that Kony is dead. In Caine's Arcade, the customers from all around the world helped Caine to have many customers and play with his arcade. In addition, there are the last similar point about each project, not about the video. They are all collecting the money from other people. KONY 2012 is collecting money that will be used for help to Uganda children, and in Caine's Arcade, the owner of the Caine's Arcade site (the customer who was impressed by Caine's Arcade and made a Facebook group) collects money for Caine's education fees.
Excellent essay! Really well written with some very keen observations about the videos. I like how you develop and conclude your comparison with a strong finish.
답글삭제The grammar is good and hardly any error. But the paragraph where you discuss the contents of both videos is too long. When you start to talk about Caine, you should make a new paragraph.
Good stuff!!!